For this discussion board, I decided to try the Reverse Outline Revision method. This method actually helps a lot in doing the required revisions. This method basically helps to get rid of the meaningless sentences. It is like going back and rereading the paragraphs to understand the main ideas of the paragraph and then revising those parts that do not fit into the paragraph. I had prepared a paper for another online class which I revised using this strategy. It was very helpful.